What will you do if you\'re stocked in an island?
학생이 쓴 원문
I remember that I answered same question distinguising blood type charactor for fun. As a typical \'O\' type person, I answered like that, \'I would easily give up to get back, but think positive. And soon, I will build a house, find some foods. Few days after, I will forget to escape there and just live and enjoy my new life.\'Plus, I would try to find people who live in the island. I need to have social life. So if there is no person in the island, sooner, I will die. Overall, I can survive in the island If only other men live there.
강사 첨삭
Good evening George,
Thank you for answering this question. I really appreciate that you try to explain your ideas in details. You are not afraid to talk about it even if it means you\'re going to commit mistakes.
Keep improving! You can do it! ^_^
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
What will you do if you\\\'re stocked in an island?
I remember that I answered same question distinguising blood type charactor for fun.
>>> I remember that I already answered the same question distinguishing my character depending on my blood type. I answered that for fun.
As a typical \'O\' type person, I answered like that, \'I would easily give up to get back, but think positive.
>>> As a typical \'O\' type person, I answered like this; \"I would easily give up just to get back but afterwards I will think in a positive way.
And soon, I will build a house, find some foods.
>>> Soon, I will build a house and find something to eat.
Few days after, I will forget to escape there and just live and enjoy my new life.
>>> After a few days, the thought of escaping the island will be gone. Then I will just start to live and enjoy my new life in the island.
\'Plus, I would try to find people who live in the island.
>>> In addition, I will find people who lives in the island so that I\'ll have someone to talk to.
I need to have social life. So if there is no person in the island, sooner, I will die.
>>> I need to have a social life. If there would be no people in the island then soon I\'ll die.
Overall, I can survive in the island If only other men live there.
>>> In other words, I can only survive in the island if I have someone with me.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.