What will you do to make it up to your closest friend if you missed attending her or his special bir
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I will explain the reason why I couldn\'t go and apologize for not going. And wouldn\'t you ask me what I want?
I think my closest frined will do what he or she wants.
If you want something, I will buy it for you, and if you ask me to do something, I think they will do it for you. However, if it has to be within the scope of the money I have and what I have to do is bad and I\'m not ashamed of it.
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Hi!
Thank you for sending your answer.
I changed some structures and wordings of your answer so we can match them with the initial sentence and thought of the question. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
First of all, I will explain the reason why I couldn\'t go and apologize for not going.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: To begin with, I’ll explain why I couldn’t attend and say sorry for not going.
And wouldn\'t you ask me what I want?
>> And should I ask her what she wants?
>> And should I ask her what she wants?
I think my closest frined will do what he or she wants.
>> I think my closest friend will do what he or she wants.
>> I think my closest friend will do what he or she wants.
If you want something, I will buy it for you, and if you ask me to do something, I think they will do it for you.
>> If she wants something, I’ll buy it for her , and if she asks me to do something, I’ll do it for her.
>> If she wants something, I’ll buy it for her , and if she asks me to do something, I’ll do it for her.
However, if it has to be within the scope of the money I have and what I have to do is bad and I\'m not ashamed of it.
>> However, it has to be within the limit of my budget and as long as what I have to do isn’t bad or embarrassing.
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