What will you do to make yourself happy?

Hi Kim,

I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.

I hope you\'ll feel better soon!!!

Have a wonderful day!!!!

T. Jeny   

It is true that happiness is one of most important things in our lives.

>>correct

 In my case, I think I should do some efforts for happiness.

>>In my case, I think I should do some effort in making myself happy.

To be specific, first of all, I will make money for me to live without difficulties that sometimes block my basic life.

>>To be specific, I have to earn money so that I can sustain my daily needs.

On the other words, if I do not get a job and make money, I cannot do anything which is activities desired such as hobbies, a marriage, even eating and so on.

>>In other words, if I don\'t have a job and make money, I can\'t do any activities that I desire such as my hobby, marriage, food and so on.

Thus, even if I cannot find a work which is not directly related to my happy, I should have something that is to take responsibility for my foundational life.

>>Thus even if I can\'t find a work which will make me happy, I should take responsibility for something for it is the foundation of life.

This is because, getting a routine job is happier than being a jobless.

>>Because it better to have a routine job than to be jobless.

Secondly, I have to rid myself of greed and then I should be a person who believes his sense of worth.

>>Secondly, I have to rid myself of greed and then I should become a person who believes on his sense of worth.
For instance, since there have been many famous people who tried to kill themself, nevertheless they are seemed to have everything on the public’s eyes.

>>For instance, since there have been many famous people who tried to kill themselves, nevertheless they seemed to have everything in the public’s eyes.

 since I think everybody could be, I would try to learn method of ridding myself of greed and gr.....

>>Since, I think everybody could, I would like to learn a method of ridding myself of greed.