What will you do tonight?

2021-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

I plan to jog in the park because I couldn\'t do the exercise recently. However, If I will finish my work too late, I can\'t do it tonight. I will try to work hard to finish faster so I will take care of my healthy myself.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you, Mr. [이름]! It’s good to see that you are making an effort answering the homework that I am giving you. I am looking forward to see you in our class. Keep safe! :)
- Teacher Sophia


I plan to jog in the park because I couldn\'t do the exercise recently.

>> I plan to jog in the park because I couldn\'t do exercises recently.
However, If I will finish my work too late, I can\'t do it tonight.

>> However, If I will finish my work too late, I wouldn\'t be able to do it tonight.
I will try to work hard to finish faster so I will take care of my healthy myself.

>> I  will try to work hard to faster so I can take care of my healthy myself.

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