What wishes do you have for your family members?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always with that my family members have good health. As I get a older, I would see my parents getting more older. and, I hope my family is happy.
강사 첨삭
You must always show your love to your parents, [이름]! I hope you are all happy and safe!-Faith-
I always with that my family members have good health. >> I always wish that my family members have good health.
As I get a older, I would see my parents getting more older. and, I hope my family is happy.
>> As I get older, I can see my parents getting older, so I hope my family is happy.
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