What word would you use to sum up your life? Why?

2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I can say that my life was a full of challenges. I haven’t lain back and always tried to challenge new things. I have continuously pushed myself hard to move forward rather than stay in one place in my life. I’ve tried to keep moving to stay afloat. If I don’t do anything toward my goals, I feel being stuck. However, I feel exhausted now and scared to try a new thing these days. I might be getting older. I know that I need to take a risk and learn from any and all results. However, I’m getting weaker and not audacious enough as before. When I was younger, I was willing to bother myself with new challenges, however, I’m getting conservative, passive, and cautious of everything. I’m losing confidence. I’m just envious of a person who achieved a lot, but don’t make an effort. It means that I’m getting greedier, but don’t want to burn the midnight oil. I want to have a slow life. The typical elderly people want to be respected and treated well just because they are old.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]. Wow! It is nice to hear that you are doing your best to reach your goals. It is also great that you always challenge yourself. That is the best way to become more succesful. I learned something from you again. Take care. See you in class. Thanks for your wonderful composition. Teacher Nina   I can say that my life was a full of challenges. >> I can say that my life was full of challenges. I haven’t lain back and always tried to challenge new things. >> I haven’t lain back and always tried to challenge myself with new things. I have continuously pushed myself hard to move forward rather than stay in one place in my life. >> correct I’ve tried to keep moving to stay afloat. >> correct If I don’t do anything toward my goals, I feel being stuck. >> correct However, I feel exhausted now and scared to try a new thing these days. >> correct I might be getting older. >> correct I know that I need to take a risk and learn from any and all results. >> correct However, I’m getting weaker and not audacious enough as before. >> correct When I was younger, I was willing to bother myself with new challenges, however, I’m getting conservative, passive, and cautious of everything. >> correct I’m losing confidence. >> correct I’m just envious of a person who achieved a lot, but don’t make an effort. >> I’m just envious of a person who achieved a lot, but doesn’t make an effort. It means that I’m getting greedier, but don’t want to burn the midnight oil. >> correct I want to have a slow life. >> correct The typical elderly people want to be respected and treated well just because they are old. >> correct

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