what work situations excite and motivate you?
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I think that work should be fun first. So we can do that in the long time. I also think that the setting and achieving goals for work are the motivation to work.
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>>CORRECT!
2. So we can do that in the long time.
>>So that we can keep doing it for a long time.
3. I also think that the setting and achieving goals for work are the motivation to work.
>>I also think that setting and achieving goals serve as our motivation to work.
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