What would a perfect city be like?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Terrific Thursday Sir [이름]!
Thanks for dropping by the board! You shared your thoughts about the topic and it seemed that you are more confident in delivering what is in your mind. Just one thing I have noticed is your capitalization. We capitalize the first word in a sentence. Have a great day!
See you around Sir [이름]!^^
~Teacher Eunice
everybody has a equal chances to be happy.
>> Everybody has an equal chance to be happy.
all people go to the hospital if they are sick and be cared free.
>> All the people can go to the hospital if they are sick so they can be well taken care of for free.
citizens have a right to express anything.
>> Citizens have the right to express anything.
>> OR: Citizens have the right to express their own opinions to the public.
and they are not punished by doing that.
>> They shouldn\'t be punished by doing that.
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