What would a perfect day look like for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
The perfect day look like me is waking up at 6am and eat food and clean my face.
After that going school and after school I go to piano academy and go back home.
After going back home I study and do English class after doing English class I eat supper and study and go to bed.
That is a perfect day look like for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
You really put in the effort today.
I\'m glad about that.
Please look at the simplified sentences.
Learn from them.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The perfect day look like me is waking up at 6am and eat food and clean my face.>> The perfect day looks like me waking up at 6 am, eating food and cleaning my face.
After that going school and after school I go to piano academy and go back home.
After that going school and after school I go to piano academy and go back home.
>> After that, I would go to school and after school, I would go to the piano academy and then go back home.
After going back home I study and do English class after doing English class I eat supper and study and go to bed.
After going back home I study and do English class after doing English class I eat supper and study and go to bed.
>> After arriving home, I would study and take my English class, then I would eat my supper, study and go to bed.
That is a perfect day look like for me.
That is a perfect day look like for me.
>> That is what a perfect day looks like for me.
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