What would a perfect day look like for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Now I think, I have never thought of \" a perfect day\".
I just finish to do of my daily schedule depending on the situation.
It\"s my pleasure that I spend time to do that.
And it looks like a happy day.
I will think about a perfect day!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
You can try writing about the same topic.
Now that I have explained the question, I think you can do better.
I look forward to that.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Now I think, I have never thought of \" a perfect day\".
>> I\'m just thinking now because I have never thought of a \"perfect day.\"
I just finish to do of my daily schedule depending on the situation.
I just finish to do of my daily schedule depending on the situation.
>> I just finish everything according to schedule depending on the situation.
It\"s my pleasure that I spend time to do that.
It\"s my pleasure that I spend time to do that.
>> I find pleasure when I spend time doing that.
And it looks like a happy day.
And it looks like a happy day.
>> It looks like a happy day.
I will think about a perfect day!!!
I will think about a perfect day!!!
>> Correct
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