What would be a good diet for someone who is obese?
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Obese people should cut the calorie first. To do this, amount of food need to reduce and dinner should be eaten by 7:00pm. Regular exercise is also needed. As we know well, good sleeping, balanced food and exercise are good for your diet.
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Obese people should cut the calorie first.
>> correct
>> OR: Obese people should cut back on their calorie intake first.
To do this, amount of food need to reduce and dinner should be eaten by 7:00pm.
>> To do this, the amount of food needs to be reduced and dinner should be eaten before or by 7 PM.
Regular exercise is also needed. As we know well, good sleep, balanced food and exercise are good for your diet.
>> correct (we just say sleep instead of sleeping)
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