What would be more difficult to eat a strange new vegetable or an exotic piece of meat?

2014-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Before i write my assay, i really thanks to you. i heard what i talk to you before and i able to know that my conversation skill is higher than before. i was owing to you! You are very nice and kind teacher who i ever meet. homework: i eat strange cook if it's smell and appear is't terrible . but i think strange meat is would be diffiscult to eat. If i don't know the meat's name, i really hesitate to eat this. Also, i like vegetable cook. My mother alwalys cook vegetable. She is so good at cook and she always so delicious and healthy cook for our family. Also i love meat! I like fried chicken very well. But there are many cook in the world and someone eat some strange meat that i did't eat in korea. For eaxample, fonigner did't eat a dog and despise eating dog. But some korean eat a dog. it is a diffrence in culture. So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat.

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Hi there^^ Wow^^ I\'m so speechless! Kkk Thank you for your compliment! I guess because you are also a good student. It\'s very easy to teach you! I can see your improvement every day! Keep it up! You are also very nice and kind. Anyway, I\'ll see you later^^ Please review those corrections I made. Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Before i write my assay, i really thanks to you. >> Before I write my essay, I really want thank you. i heard what i talk to you before and i able to know that my conversation skill is higher than before. >> I listened to our class before and I was able to know that my conversation skill is better than before. i was owing to you! >> I owe you! You are very nice and kind teacher who i ever meet.>> You are the nicest and kindest teacher I have ever met.homework: i eat strange cook if it\'s smell and appear is\'t terrible . >> I eat strange food if it doesn\'t smell and appear terrible. but i think strange meat is would be diffiscult to eat. >> But I think strange meat would always be difficult to eat. If i don\'t know the meat\'s name, i really hesitate to eat this. >> If I don\'t know the meat\'s name, I really hesitate to eat it. Also, i like vegetable cook. >> Also, I like vegetable dishes. My mother alwalys cook vegetable. >> CORRECT^ >> My mother always cook vegetables. She is so good at cook and she always so delicious and healthy cook for our family. >> She is so good at cooking and she always make so delicious and healthy dishes for our family. Also i love meat! >> Also, I love meat! >> I also\\ love meat! I like fried chicken very well. >> CORRECT^^ But there are many cook in the world and someone eat some strange meat that i did\'t eat in korea. >> But there are many dishes in the world and someone eat some strange meats that I don\'t eat in Korea. For eaxample, fonigner did\'t eat a dog and despise eating dog. But some korean eat a dog. >> For example, foreigners don\'t eat dog meat and despise eating dog meat but some Koreans eat dof meat.it is a diffrence in culture. >> It\'s different in every culture. So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat. >> So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat.

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