What would be more difficult to eat a strange new vegetable or an exotic piece of meat?
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homework: i eat strange cook if it's smell and appear is't terrible . but i think strange meat is would be diffiscult to eat. If i don't know the meat's name, i really hesitate to eat this. Also, i like vegetable cook. My mother alwalys cook vegetable. She is so good at cook and she always so delicious and healthy cook for our family. Also i love meat! I like fried chicken very well. But there are many cook in the world and someone eat some strange meat that i did't eat in korea. For eaxample, fonigner did't eat a dog and despise eating dog. But some korean eat a dog.
it is a diffrence in culture. So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat.
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Before i write my assay, i really thanks to you.
>> Before I write my essay, I really want thank you.
i heard what i talk to you before and i able to know that my conversation skill is higher than before.
>> I listened to our class before and I was able to know that my conversation skill is better than before.
i was owing to you!
>> I owe you!
You are very nice and kind teacher who i ever meet.>> You are the nicest and kindest teacher I have ever met.homework:
i eat strange cook if it\'s smell and appear is\'t terrible .
>> I eat strange food if it doesn\'t smell and appear terrible.
but i think strange meat is would be diffiscult to eat.
>> But I think strange meat would always be difficult to eat.
If i don\'t know the meat\'s name, i really hesitate to eat this.
>> If I don\'t know the meat\'s name, I really hesitate to eat it.
Also, i like vegetable cook.
>> Also, I like vegetable dishes.
My mother alwalys cook vegetable.
>> CORRECT^
>> My mother always cook vegetables.
She is so good at cook and she always so delicious and healthy cook for our family.
>> She is so good at cooking and she always make so delicious and healthy dishes for our family.
Also i love meat!
>> Also, I love meat!
>> I also\\ love meat!
I like fried chicken very well.
>> CORRECT^^
But there are many cook in the world and someone eat some strange meat that i did\'t eat in korea. >> But there are many dishes in the world and someone eat some strange meats that I don\'t eat in Korea.
For eaxample, fonigner did\'t eat a dog and despise eating dog. But some korean eat a dog.
>> For example, foreigners don\'t eat dog meat and despise eating dog meat but some Koreans eat dof meat.it is a diffrence in culture.
>> It\'s different in every culture.
So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat.
>> So it would be more difficult for me to eat strange meat.
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