What would be more difficult to eat a strange new vegetable or an exotic piece of meat?
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What would be more difficult to eat a strange new vegetable or an exotic piece of meat?
In my opinion, the meat is more difficult eating than new vegetable.
A person tends to think animals have emotion as human, because they are breathing and fooling the blood. Furthermore, butcher for consumption dies them. On the other hand, the vegetable do not need kill animals for consumption. With piking and catching in correcting way for eating the vegetable that do not have blood. While A person fist see new foods, they imagine foods that before cooking. Also person might be empathy with foods. So I think meat is more difficult.
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What would be more difficult to eat a strange new vegetable or an exotic piece of meat?In my opinion, the meat is more difficult eating than new vegetable.
>> In my opinion, meat is more difficult to eat than a new vegetable.A person tends to think animals have emotion as human, because they are breathing and fooling the blood.
>> A person tends to think that animals have emotions like humans because they breathing and have blood.
Furthermore, butcher for consumption dies them.
>> Furthermore, butchers kill them.
>> Furthermore, consumers kill them.
On the other hand, the vegetable do not need kill animals for consumption.
>> On the other hand, vegetables don\'t need to kill animals for consumption.
With piking and catching in correcting way for eating the vegetable that do not have blood.
>> What do you mean?
>> Do you mean, \"Picking and harvesting is the correct way to eat vegetables.
While A person fist see new foods, they imagine foods that before cooking.
>> While a person can see new food, they will imagine that food before cooking it.
Also person might be empathy with foods.
>> Also, people might empathize with food.
So I think meat is more difficult.
>> So I think meat is more difficult to eat.
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