What would be one thing you would wish for yourself?

2019-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I really hated to travel alone, but There was a chance to take a trip alone inevitably. That was a business trip to Cham city in Swiss for training. When I knew that I had to attend the training in another country, I felt nervous, scared and embarrassed because I hadn\'t taken a trip without any fellow travelers. However, it was valuable experience because I met various friends and had a chance to discuss about the procedure that trainees did in their institution. I went for a walk every night after training and saw many local people walking out in the park. I did feel board during whole period in Swiss. It was exciting to find the good restaurant for dinner and meet unexpected people in various places. With this experience, I wish travelling Europe alone and explore wide experience for me.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for answering the question [이름]! Please take note of this: Swiss - a person living in Switzerland. Switzerland - the country.

~~Teacher May~~

I really hated to travel alone, but There was a chance to take a trip alone inevitably.

>> I really hated to travel alone, but I had a chance to go on a trip alone inevitably.

That was a business trip to Cham city in Swiss for training.

>> That was a business trip to Cham city in Switzerland for training.

 When I knew that I had to attend the training in another country, I felt nervous, scared and embarrassed because I hadn\'t taken a trip without any fellow travelers.

However, it was valuable experience because I met various friends and had a chance to discuss about the procedure that trainees did in their institution.

I went for a walk every night after training and saw many local people walking out in the park.

>> CORRECT

I did feel board during whole period in Swiss.

>> I felt bored during my stay in Switzerland.

It was exciting to find the good restaurant for dinner and meet unexpected people in various places.

>> It was exciting to find a good restaurant for dinner and to meet people unexpectedly in various places.

With this experience, I wish travelling Europe alone and explore wide experience for me.

>> With this experience, I wish that travelling to Europe alone can widen my experiences.

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