What would be the biggest challenge of living on an island?
학생이 쓴 원문
the first, it is difficult to meet friend on land.
i am in order to meet friend, i should take a airplane. so i should airplane ticket.
airplane ticket is expensive. so i can\'t be able to go on land often.
the second, i can work on possible company is limited.
island\'s company is less than on land\'s company.
so if i want change work, i should transfer to on land.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I totally agree with you. I watched a Korean drama titled \"Welcome to Samdal-ri,\" and I realized that people living on Jeju Island seem to be living in a different country than mainland Korea. The mainland is very different from how they live their lives there, and you are right; opportunities might be limited on islands.
- T. Caitlyn
The first, it is difficult to meet friend on land.
>> First, it is difficult to meet friends on the mainland.
i am in order to meet friend, i should take a airplane. so i should airplane ticket.
i am in order to meet friend, i should take a airplane. so i should airplane ticket.
>> In order to meet my friends, I have to take an airplane. So, I need an airplane ticket.
airplane ticket is expensive. so i can\'t be able to go on land often.
airplane ticket is expensive. so i can\'t be able to go on land often.
>> Airplane tickets are expensive, so I can’t go to the mainland often.
the second, i can work on possible company is limited.
the second, i can work on possible company is limited.
>> Second, the number of companies I can work for is limited.
island\'s company is less than on land\'s company.
island\'s company is less than on land\'s company.
>> There are fewer companies on the island than on the mainland.
so if i want change work, i should transfer to on land.
so if i want change work, i should transfer to on land.
>> So, if I want to change jobs, I have to move to the mainland.
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