What would be the first to care
학생이 쓴 원문
There is no doubt the safety of human would be the first priorty to care. Until they figure out what the problem is, they should stop running the train with unknowm troubles. They might think that a little behind of the schedule or sudden stop on the rail road is not severe enough to care or stop running. However, they don't even know what it will cause other problems and what the cause is. All they can do in this situation to prevent from a big accident which hasn't happen but might happen in the future is to stop running the troubled train.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Yes, I agree with what you wrote for tonight. We can't take for granted small problems, because they can turn fatal in the future. Have a good night and talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ
There is no doubt the safety of human would be the first priorty to care.
>>There is no doubt the safety of human should be the first priorty.
Until they figure out what the problem is, they should stop running the train with unknowm troubles.
>>correct
They might think that a little behind of the schedule or sudden stop on the rail road is not severe enough to care or stop running.
>>They might think that being a little behind schedule or the train suddenly stopping on the rail road is not severe enough to take caution or stop running.
However, they don't even know what it will cause other problems and what the cause is.
>>However, they don't even know what other problems it will cause and what the cause of this problem is.
All they can do in this situation to prevent from a big accident which hasn't happen but might happen in the future is to stop running the troubled train.
>>All they can do in this situation to prevent a big accident which hasn't happen, but might happen in the future is to stop running the troubled train.
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