What would be the responsibilities of mother?
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Here are my corrections for you:
Of which thing is the responsibilities of mother?
>> What are the responsibilities of a mother?
At first I thought it was to take care their children.
>> At first, I thought it was to take care of their children.
However, This is not specific.
>> However, this is not specific.
Then is it to feed their children?
>> Then I though, is it to feed their children?
Why would fathers don\'t do that?
>> But, can\'t fathers do that?
I guess it is too hard to figure out mother\'s responsibilities.
>> I guess it is too hard to figure out a mother\'s responsibilities.
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