What would be the responsibilities of mother?

2021-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Of which thing is the responsibilities of mother? At first I thought it was to take care their children. However, This is not specific. Then is it to feed their children? Why would fathers don\'t do that? I guess it is too hard to figure out mother\'s responsibilities.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Of which thing is the responsibilities of mother?

>> What are the responsibilities of a mother?

 At first I thought it was to take care their children. 

>> At first, I thought it was to take care of their children. 

However, This is not specific. 

>> However, this is not specific. 

Then is it to feed their children? 

>> Then I though, is it to feed their children? 

Why would fathers don\'t do that? 

>> But, can\'t fathers do that? 

I guess it is too hard to figure out mother\'s responsibilities.

>> I guess it is too hard to figure out a mother\'s responsibilities.

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