What would be your best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test?

2014-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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First of all, I will console a friend. And then I will advice, " You were unfortunate. Don't give up!". I also twice failed an exam for being a teacher, and then passed. At that time, if I gave up, I wasn't be a teacher. So, my best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test is "Don't give up!".

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jaime!^^

Great job!

I think you are a precious friend to have.

Encouragements are really important and very helpful in times of need.

You not only help you\'re friend but you become a really nice person.

Keep up the good job.Take care.^^

 

T. Debby^^

 

Here are my corrections for you today:

 

First of all, I will console a friend.

>> CORRECT

OR> I will sympathize with my friend.

 And then I will advice, \" You were unfortunate. Don\'t give up!\".

>> CORRECT

OR> I will advice my friend to not give up.

 I also twice failed an exam for being a teacher, and then passed.

>> CORRECT

OR> I failed twice on an exam before but then I passed.

At that time, if I gave up, I wasn\'t be a teacher.

>> At that time, if i gave up, I wouldn\'t be a teacher.

So, my best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test is \"Don\'t give up!\".

>> CORRECT

Or> The best advice I could share to a friend who failed would be to try hard and never give up.

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