What would be your best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test?
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Hi there Jaime!^^
Great job!
I think you are a precious friend to have.
Encouragements are really important and very helpful in times of need.
You not only help you\'re friend but you become a really nice person.
Keep up the good job.Take care.^^
T. Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
First of all, I will console a friend.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will sympathize with my friend.
And then I will advice, \" You were unfortunate. Don\'t give up!\".
>> CORRECT
OR> I will advice my friend to not give up.
I also twice failed an exam for being a teacher, and then passed.
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OR> I failed twice on an exam before but then I passed.
At that time, if I gave up, I wasn\'t be a teacher.
>> At that time, if i gave up, I wouldn\'t be a teacher.
So, my best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test is \"Don\'t give up!\".
>> CORRECT
Or> The best advice I could share to a friend who failed would be to try hard and never give up.
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