What would be your ideal birthday celebration?
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As long as I get presents that I really wanted to with a cake, I actually don’t need a big celebration for my birthday. If I have only thing that I really hope, all my family members including my sisters from overseas gather at home and l hope that after I blew the candles they each get me gifts l really wanted like Santa Claus gifts. I think it will be amazing than anything.
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As long as I get presents that I really wanted to with a cake, I
actually don’t need a big celebration for my birthday. If I have only
thing that I really hope, all my family members including my sisters
from overseas gather at home and l hope that after I blew the candles
they each get me gifts l really wanted like Santa Claus gifts. I think
it will be amazing than anything.
>> As long as I get presents that I really wanted to with a cake, I
actually don’t need a big celebration for my birthday. If I have only
one thing that I really hope, that is all of my family members including my sisters
from overseas will gather at home and l hope that after I blew the candles
they each will give me gifts that l really wanted like Santa Claus gifts. I think
it will be amazing than anything else.
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