What would be your ideal living arrangement? house in a city flat studio cottage castle Why?
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My ideal living arrangement is living in a big home with my family and millions of money. Family is the most important element in living arrangement, and the money is also the important thing. I love both of them, so I want to live in a big home with my family and a lot of money.
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My ideal living arrangement is living in a big home with my family and millions of money.
>> My ideal living arrangement is living in a big home with my family and having millions of money.
Family is the most important element in living arrangement, and the money is also the important thing.
>> Family is the most important element in a living arrangement, and money is also an essential thing.
I love both of them, so I want to live in a big home with my family and a lot of money.
>> I love both of them, so I want to live in a big home with my family and have a lot of money.
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