What would be your perfect Valentine\'s day?
학생이 쓴 원문
My perfact Valentine\'s day is now
I think My family stays healthy and enjoying life each other
So I always want to be happy like Valentine\'s day
강사 첨삭
Awesome Tuesday, Kay! Here\'s a reminder for you; Study while others are sleeping, Work while others are loading, Prepare while others are playing, and Dream while others are wishing. I am always here foy you.
My perfact Valentine\'s day is now
>> My perfect Valentine\'s day is today.
I think My family stays healthy and enjoying life each other
>> I think my perfect Valentines day is that when I have a healthy and fun family.
So I always want to be happy like Valentine\'s day
>> So, I want to be happy all the time just like it\'s Valentines day everyday.
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