What would be your perfect Valentine\'s Day?
학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe I think you know that I received gifts from passengers who are children during work. Sometimes I don\'t know why I work as a mechanic at airport. But by receiving that I can find is the reason. Besides Valentine\'s Day It\'s pretty worth a shot in my career. :)
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Elic! Learning is your super power. Remember, never stop trying, and never stop growing your brain ;)
Maybe I think you know that I received gifts from passengers who are children during work.
>> I think you already know that I was able to receive some gifts from my passengers at work.
Sometimes I don\'t know why I work as a mechanic at airport. But by receiving that I can find is the reason.
>> Sometimes I wonder why I worked as an aircraft mechanic, but when I received the gifts from my passengers, I already knew the reason why.
Besides Valentine\'s Day It\'s pretty worth a shot in my career.
>> Aside from it\'s Valentine\'s day, being appreciated is worth a shot in my career.
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