What would it be like to work in the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don’t want to work in the weekend. I think the weekend should be recovery time from the work stress for another week. During the week, we don’t have much time to do what I really want like workout, watching TV, or having a time with whom I want to be. So, those are the reason why I don’t want to work in the weekend. But, if I had to work in the weekend, I would want to get more pay or something more worth it like accomplishment.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Definitely, nobody enjoys working in the weekend.
- T. Beth
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Actually, I don’t want to work in the weekend. >>> correct
I think the weekend should be recovery time from the work stress for another week.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I think the weekend should be a recovery time from the stress due to work for another week.
During the week, we don’t have much time to do what I really want like workout, watching TV, or having a time with whom I want to be.
>>> During the week, we don’t have much time to do what we really want like working out, watching TV, or spending time with whom I want.
So, those are the reason why I don’t want to work in the weekend.
>>> correct
But, if I had to work in the weekend, I would want to get more pay or something more worth it like accomplishment.
>>> correct
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