What would life be like if you suddenly became allergic to your favorite food?
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I totally agree with the things you mentioned below, Sir [이름]!
People love to eat even if those foods are bad for them.
Some people say, it is okay to eat those foods they are allergic to if it is only a small amount of it,
When people feel stressed, they often indulge themselves to eat what they want.
And that\'s the reason why some of them gain a lot of weight, like me. Hihihi.
Awesome composition again. Keep it up.
I hope you\'ll eat something special tonight or tomorrow.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I might feel miserable when I suddenly become allergic to my favorite food.
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Actually I have an indigestion problem, so I’m always cautious about what to eat and how much to eat.
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When I eat a little bit more than I can digest or oily or fried food, I feel stodgy and uncomfortable.
>> Better: When I eat a little bit more than I can digest. oily or fried food, I feel stodgy and uncomfortable.
My intestine is often filled with gas.
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So, I can understand people who suffer from food.
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Eating is one of human’s basic instinct and joys.
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If we are deprived of the joy of eating delicious food in our lives, our life will become much drier and dull.
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I know many people around me who are allergic to specific food like yoke, milk, or wheat based foods.
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Let’s suppose that there are foods you really like, but cannot eat due to your allergic reaction to such food, it would be disastrous.
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Without a doubt, it will be really painful for people to refrain himself/herself from doing or eating something against human’s basic instinct.
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The truth is that foods that are bad for your health are actually sweet on your tongue
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