What would life be like if you suddenly became allergic to your favorite food?

2015-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I might feel miserable when I suddenly become allergic to my favorite food. Actually I have an indigestion problem, so I’m always cautious about what to eat and how much to eat.When I eat a little bit more than I can digest or oily or fried food, I feel stodgy and uncomfortable. My intestine is often filled with gas. So, I can understand people who suffer from food. Eating is one of human’s basic instinct and joys. If we are deprived of the joy of eating delicious food in our lives, our life will become much drier and dull.I know many people around me who are allergic to specific food like yoke, milk, or wheat based foods. Let’s suppose that there are foods you really like, but cannot eat due to your allergic reaction to such food, it would be disastrous. Without a doubt, it will be really painful for people to refrain himself/herself from doing or eating something against human’s basic instinct.The truth is that foods that are bad for your health are actually sweet on your tongue

강사 첨삭

I totally agree with the things you mentioned below, Sir [이름]!

People love to eat even if those foods are bad for them.

Some people say, it is okay to eat those foods they are allergic to if it is only a small amount of it,

When people feel stressed, they often indulge themselves to eat what they want.

And that\'s the reason why some of them gain a lot of weight, like me. Hihihi.

Awesome composition again. Keep it up.

I hope you\'ll eat something special tonight or tomorrow.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina


I might feel miserable when I suddenly become allergic to my favorite food. 

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Actually I have an indigestion problem, so I’m always cautious about what to eat and how much to eat.

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When I eat a little bit more than I can digest or oily or fried food, I feel stodgy and uncomfortable.

>> Better: When I eat a little bit more than I can digest. oily or fried food, I feel stodgy and uncomfortable.

My intestine is often filled with gas.

>> correct

So, I can understand people who suffer from food.

>> correct

Eating is one of human’s basic instinct and joys.

>> correct

If we are deprived of the joy of eating delicious food in our lives, our life will become much drier and dull.

>> correct

I know many people around me who are allergic to specific food like yoke, milk, or wheat based foods.

>> correct

Let’s suppose that there are foods you really like, but cannot eat due to your allergic reaction to such food, it would be disastrous.

>> correct

Without a doubt, it will be really painful for people to refrain himself/herself from doing or eating something against human’s basic instinct.

>> correct

The truth is that foods that are bad for your health are actually sweet on your tongue

>> correct

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