What would life be like without friends?
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If we live without our friends, there is no pleasure to live. Friends help our lives happier. Also they help by just listening my stroy when we have a tough day. So, living without friends is less happy and more griefless.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleIf we live without our friends, there is no pleasure to live.
>> CORRECT!
Friends help our lives happier.
>> CORRECT!
Also they help by just listening my stroy when we have a tough day.
>> Also, they help us by just listening to our stories when we have a tough day.
So, living without friends is less happy and more griefless.
>> So, living without friends is less happy and more grief.
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