What would life be like without weekends? Do you have enough free time?

2021-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I can\'t imagine my life without weekends. If there aren\'t weekends in life, it would be terrible. I think labor should be accompanied by rest. Otherwise, people can\'t keep working in a long time and they don\'t have enough energy to live. Especially, free time and rest time is very important to people who are the type of homebody including me. So I think there must be weekends in our life. I think I have enough free time cause I work in a shifting job. I can take a rest, read some books and play the piano when it\'s my day-off. So, I like my shifting schedule at work.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Solyna! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your the night! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I can\'t imagine my life without weekends.
>> CORRECT!

If there aren\'t weekends in life, it would be terrible.
>> CORRECT!

I think labor should be accompanied by rest. 
>> CORRECT!

Otherwise, people can\'t keep working in a long time and they don\'t have enough energy to live.
>> Otherwise, people can\'t keep working for a long time and they won\'t have enough energy to live.

Especially, free time and rest time is very important to people who are the type of homebody including me.
>> Especially, free time and rest time is very important to people who are house-person like me.

So I think there must be weekends in our life.
>> CORRECT!

I think I have enough free time cause I work in a shifting job. 
>> I think I have enough free time because I work in a shifting job. 

I can take a rest, read some books and play the piano when it\'s my day-off.
>> I can take a rest, read some books and play the piano when it\'s my day off.

So, I like my shifting schedule at work.
>> CORRECT!

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