What would motivate you to continue working out?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a goal is important for motivation.
Especially, short term goals is more effective.
If I have to lose my weight in one week, it\'s more motivation.
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I think a goal is important for motivation.
>> Correct
Especially, short term goals is more effective.
>> Especially, short-term goals are more effective.
If I have to lose my weight in one week, it\'s more motivation.
>> If I have to lose weight in one week, it\'s more motivating.
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