What would people think of two women involved in a fist fight?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow i didn\'t think about this subject.
Two women are doing a fist fight.
So, who is the winner..?
I think the winner is having a good condition than the others.
It\'s just joke.
I remember the two women\'s fight with one baby and Solomon.
Solomon was the most genius in the world.
And two women came to him and asked about baby.
Maybe, they fought to fist before go to Solomon.
One bad mother was lost her baby and took another mom\'s baby.
So Solomon told them doing cut it half that baby.
The real mother were crying and plead that please save that baby, i\'m not real mother.
And liar said \"cut it half and gave me to me\".
So Solomon judged that the real mom is her, gave that baby to her.
I read that story and thought about real mom.
Love makes her to fight.
And sometime, people protects someone for love, they are fighting.
It\'s not a guilty that are innocent.
\'Every fighting is guilty\' that sentence is having a contradiction.
But based fight is not good. : )
I love peace.
강사 첨삭
Hi Simon. Happy first day of the month! Thank you for always not forgetting to do your homework. I really appreciate it. Until the next homework! See you on Monday! Enjoy your time with your friends and their children. :)
Two women are doing a fist fight.
>>CORRECT
So, who is the winner..?
>>So who is the winner? :)
I think the winner is having a good condition than the others.
>>I think the winner has a good condition than the other.
It\'s just joke.
>>CORRECT :)
I remember the two women\'s fight with one baby and Solomon.
>>I remember about the two women who were fighting about a baby during King Solomon\'s time.
Solomon was the most genius in the world.
>>CORRECT
And two women came to him and asked about baby.
>>And two women came to hm and asked about the baby.
Maybe, they fought to fist before go to Solomon.
>>Maybe, they fought using their fist before going to Solomon.
One bad mother was lost her baby and took another mom\'s baby.
>>One bad mother lost her baby and took another\'s baby.
So Solomon told them doing cut it half that baby.
>>So, Solomon told them to just cut the baby in half.
The real mother were crying and plead that please save that baby, i\'m not real mother.
>>The real mother was crying and pleading to save the baby saying \"I\'m not the real mother.\"
And liar said \"cut it half and gave me to me\".
>>And the liar said \"Cut it in half and give it to me.\"
So Solomon judged that the real mom is her, gave that baby to her.
>>So Solomon was the judge and gave the baby to the real mother.
I read that story and thought about real mom.
>>I read that story and thought about the real mom.
Love makes her to fight.
>>CORRECT
And sometime, people protects someone for love, they are fighting.
>>And sometimes, people protect someone for love, they fight for love.
It\'s not a guilty that are innocent.
>>It\'s not about being guilty or innocent.
\'Every fighting is guilty\' that sentence is having a contradiction.
>>\"Every fight is considered guilty\" that sentence is a contradiction.
But based fight is not good. : )
>>But fighting is not good.
I love peace.
~Teacher Sheila :)
Wow i didn\'t think about this subject.
>>Wow! I didn\'t think about this subject.
>>Wow! I didn\'t think about this subject.
Two women are doing a fist fight.
>>CORRECT
So, who is the winner..?
>>So who is the winner? :)
I think the winner is having a good condition than the others.
>>I think the winner has a good condition than the other.
It\'s just joke.
>>CORRECT :)
I remember the two women\'s fight with one baby and Solomon.
>>I remember about the two women who were fighting about a baby during King Solomon\'s time.
Solomon was the most genius in the world.
>>CORRECT
And two women came to him and asked about baby.
>>And two women came to hm and asked about the baby.
Maybe, they fought to fist before go to Solomon.
>>Maybe, they fought using their fist before going to Solomon.
One bad mother was lost her baby and took another mom\'s baby.
>>One bad mother lost her baby and took another\'s baby.
So Solomon told them doing cut it half that baby.
>>So, Solomon told them to just cut the baby in half.
The real mother were crying and plead that please save that baby, i\'m not real mother.
>>The real mother was crying and pleading to save the baby saying \"I\'m not the real mother.\"
And liar said \"cut it half and gave me to me\".
>>And the liar said \"Cut it in half and give it to me.\"
So Solomon judged that the real mom is her, gave that baby to her.
>>So Solomon was the judge and gave the baby to the real mother.
I read that story and thought about real mom.
>>I read that story and thought about the real mom.
Love makes her to fight.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Love made her to fight.
And sometime, people protects someone for love, they are fighting.
>>And sometimes, people protect someone for love, they fight for love.
It\'s not a guilty that are innocent.
>>It\'s not about being guilty or innocent.
\'Every fighting is guilty\' that sentence is having a contradiction.
>>\"Every fight is considered guilty\" that sentence is a contradiction.
But based fight is not good. : )
>>But fighting is not good.
I love peace.
>>CORRECT
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