What would the trees say to humans (if they could talk)?"
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When trees could talk with me.
I will talk about tree and my life with tree
>> If trees could talk with me, I would talk to them about my life.
I think tree willbe lonely and I want to be tree friend
>> I think they would be lonely so I\'d like to be their friend.
When i became tree i will be lonely to with no family or friends
>> If I\'d become a tree, I\'d be lonely too with no friends nor family.
Tree is giving me a clear air so i am happy to have a tree
>> Trees give us fresh air so I am happy that we have trees.
I like tree
>> I like trees.
Have a nice day teacher bye
>> Have a nice day teacher! Bye!
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