What would the trees say to humans (if they could talk)?"

2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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When trees could talk with me. I will talk about tree and my life with tree I think tree willbe lonely and I want to be tree freind When i became tree i will be lonely to with no family or friends Tree is giving me a clear air so i am happy to have a tree I like tree Have a nice day teacher bye TITLE: Ice cream that doesn’t melt   August 21, 2017 too

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^_^

Happy Friday!


Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework.

I have made some modifications below.

I have read it well. I will see you then again on Monday!

Have a good night!^^ Enjoy your weekend!


_T. Mayleen :)


When trees could talk with me.
I will talk about tree and my life with tree

>> If trees could talk with me, I would talk to them about my life.


I think tree willbe lonely and I want to be tree friend

>> I think they would be lonely so I\'d like to be their friend.


When i became tree i will be lonely to with no family or friends

>> If I\'d become a tree, I\'d be lonely too with no friends nor family.


Tree is giving me a clear air so i am happy to have a tree

>> Trees give us fresh air so I am happy that we have trees.


I like tree

>> I like trees.

Have a nice day teacher bye

>> Have a nice day teacher! Bye!


TITLE: Ice cream that doesn’t melt   August 21, 2017 too

>> Let\'s discuss this article on August 21,2017: Ice cream that doesn’t melt.

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