What would the world be like if everyone had access to a good education?

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Even if every people in the world had opportunity to access good education, our society would be the same as now. 

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It is true that wealthness takes a lot of influence on education, also, it takes the big part on people\'s lives.

>>It is true that wealth takes a lot of influence on education, also, it takes the big part on people\'s lives.

From long time ago, importance of early education has mentioned and parents do a lot of invest on their children for better and higher education. 

>>For a long time now, the importance of early education had been important and parents invest so much on their children\'s higher education. 

If people in the world can have good education level, people\'s knowledgeable would get higher.

>>If people in the world can attain a good level of education, people\'s knowledgeable would get more developed.

However, they would compete with other things such as variety and unique experiences.

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This is what happens in Korea.

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Korea is one of high competitive in education.

>>Korea is a country with high competitiveness in education.

Previously, students smartness and higher knowledge takes a biggest part when their entering the university.

>>Previously, students intelligence and higher knowledge take the biggest part when their entering the university.

On thop of that, they have to participate on creating youtube c[이름]nels or volunteers to make them difference then the others. 

>>On top of that, they have to participate in or create YouTube C[이름]nels or they have to volunteer to make a difference to others. 

Therefore, I believe student\'s competitive will be more intense if the higher education equally serves for everyone.

>>Therefore, I believe student\'s competitiveness will be more intense if the higher education is equally available for everyone.