What would the world be like if it was run by teenagers?
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The world will be failed.
Because they can't run it well.
They don't think serious.
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The world will be failed.
>> The world will fail if it will be ruled by teenagers.Because they can\'t run it well.
>>correct
>>Or: Because they don\'t have any idea how will they be able to run it well.
They don\'t think serious.
>> Nowadays, teenagers don\'t think seriously.
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