What would you change about your life if you could?

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If I could change any component of my life, I want to change my appearance and personality for being a better person that I have both of them.
>> If I could change any aspect in my life, I would like to change my appearance and personality to become a better person.
It will be making a person who exudes confidence about everything and giving me a better achievement that I may embark on many types of works afterwards that includes people’s relationship, works for my career or more.
>> I will become a person who exudes confidence in everything and brings better achievement that I may embark on different types of work . Afterwards it will influence my relationship with others and will have a good impression in my career.
 At the same time, everybody who knows me could be friends that give me a hand well than before because I become a marvelous woman!
>> At the same time, people who knows me could be my friends that will give me a hand during difficult times compared before because I\'ve change and become a marvelous woman.
 It is hard to believe that what I said, but it is true that people are getting along well with those who have the nice appearance these days.
>>It is hard to believe what I\'ve said but it is the truth. These days people get along well with those who have a good appearance.
Therefore, I think having a good appearance that makes a favorable impression is one of competitiveness.
>> Therefore, I think having a good appearance contribute to a favorable impression.
So If I have a opportunity to change one thing that I have, I will choose changing my appearance!

>> So, if I have the opportunity to change one thing, I will choose to change my appearance.