What would you change about your life if you could
학생이 쓴 원문
I would change my habit chewing my nail
I have been having this habit since i was elementary student. So it’s too hard to correct the habit.
And i would read many books
강사 첨삭
WRITING TASK: What would you change about your life if you could?
I have been having this habit since i was elementary student.
I would change my habit chewing my nail.
>> I would change my habit of chewing my fingernail.
I have been having this habit since i was elementary student.
>> I have had this habit since I was an elementary student.
So it’s too hard to correct the habit.
>> So, it’s so hard to correct the habit.
And i would read many books.
>> And I would also read many books.
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