What would you choose money or love? Explain.
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When I was [이름] I seriously thought about this topic.
>>> Correct.
At that time, I chose money because I thought money can solve everything.
>>> Correct.
If someone has a communication problem, he can consult with a physician or professional doctor.
>>> Correct.
But I changed my thought after I joined the company.
>>> Correct.
I live in the same area with my parents and it is the first time to work or live without my parents.
>>> I don\'t live in the same area with my parents and it is my first time to work and live without them.
Communicate with strangers who are not familiar with me is tough.
>>> Communicating with strangers I am not familiar with is tough.
Some co-worker is good and reasonable but others are not.
>>> Some co-workers are nice and reasonable but others are not.
One of my managers is hard to communicate and not kind.
>>> One of my managers is not good in communicating and is not kind.
He is very stubborn, offensive and always finds fault and condemn it.
>>> He is very stubborn, offensive and always finds fault to condemn.
No one wants to work with him.
>>> Correct.
After I met him, I changed my mind.
>>> Correct.
Even he gave a big amount of money saying \"stay with me\", I don\'t want to stay with him at a moment.
>>> Even if he gives me a big amount of money and asks me to stay with him, I won\'t do it.
I prefer to work by myself and earn money even it is hard.
>>> I prefer to work and earn money by myself even if it is hard.
After the hard work, I have a family welcoming me and respect each other.
>>> After working hard, I have a family to welcome me home. We respect each other.
It is much worth and priceless time.
>>> It is worthwhile and priceless.
That\'s why I choose Love.
>>> Correct.
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