What would you consider as a great weekend?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
How are you doing today?
I hope that you had a great weekend.
Thank you for spending some time to write a composition.
I am excited to hear your stories in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina
Doing some exercise, eating delicious food, and get some sound sleep can be considered the great weekend.
>> Better: Doing some exercise, eating delicious food, and get some sound sleep can be considered a great weekend.
It should not be hectic, however, idling too much without doing any meaningful things can makes me feel guilty for wasting time.
>> It should not be hectic, however, idling too much without doing any meaningful things can make me feel guilty for wasting my time.
So, it should be well balanced between rest and being productive.
>> correct
Some people like to sleep in during the weekends, however, I like to start a weekend as early as possible, so that I can do many things that can be fruitful and memorable.
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Weekends used well can provide a regular natural break in which to switch off my work-related focus and remind myself of the other priorities in my life.
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It may even be time to remind myself what those original priorities were, why I have always worked so hard, what it’s all been for.
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Spending weekends with my family is always important.
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During the week life can be so hectic with unforgiving back-to-back appointments to accommodate.
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Weekends potentially offer valuable time to properly talk, share and laugh together.
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