What would you do and feel if you were refused entry to somewhere because of what you are wearing?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a soldier, I tried to go clubbing, but I was reject to enter a nightclub. It was not because of my clothes, but because of my overall appearance. I felt so ashamed. There were so many pretty ladies looking at me.
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When I was a soldier, I tried to go clubbing, but I was reject to enter a nightclub.
>> When I was a soldier, I tried to go clubbing, but I was denied to enter a nightclub.
It was not because of my clothes, but because of my overall appearance.
>> correct!
I felt so ashamed.
>> correct!
There were so many pretty ladies looking at me.
>> correct!
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