What would you do differently if there were 30 hours in a day?

2015-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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I think there would be not much difference from what I’m doing even if a day has 30 hours.People naturally adapt themselves to environments. Haven’t we already experienced that when we were in school, we used to cram for mid or finals and wished to have more time, even a few hours? If I had a few more hours, I could prepare for the exams perfectly.However, when we were actually given more time such as the postponed exam, did we study more and got better scores? Absolutely no.When we have more time a day, our life will change accordingly. We will work longer hours, sleep more, and watching TV longer than before. The absolute amount of time for certain activities will increase, but the ratio of the allocated time of each activity out of total hours won’t change from today’s.It means that it is unlikely for you to do a new thing. You may complaint about not enough time to do something, however, it is an excuse. In most cases, if you are determined strongly, you can make time to do it.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday!

Thanks for your time. ^.^

You are right! We should make use of our time wisely.

Have a great week ahead of you.
Teacher Nina


I think there would be not much difference from what I’m doing even if a day has 30 hours.

>> Correct

People naturally adapt themselves to environments.

>> Correct

>> OR: People naturally adapt themselves to the environment.

Haven’t we already experienced that when we were in school, we used to cram for mid or finals and wished to have more time, even a few hours?

>> Better: Haven’t we already experienced that when we were in school, we used to cram for mid or finals and wished to have more time, even just for a few hours?

If I had a few more hours, I could prepare for the exams perfectly.

>> Correct

However, when we were actually given more time such as the postponed exam, did we study more and got better scores?

>> Correct

Absolutely no.

>> Correct

When we have more time a day, our life will change accordingly.

>> Correct

We will work longer hours, sleep more, and watching TV longer than before.

>> Correct

The absolute amount of time for certain activities will increase, but the ratio of the allocated time of each activity out of total hours won’t change from today’s.

>> Correct

It means that it is unlikely for you to do a new thing.

>> Correct

You may complaint about not enough time to do something, however, it is an excuse.

>> Did you mean: You may complain about not having enough time to do something, however, it is an excuse.

>> OR: You may complain about the lack of time to do something, however, it is an excuse.

In most cases, if you are determined strongly, you can make time to do it.

>> Correct

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