What would you do if most of your friends couldn’t make it to your wedding?

2022-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

학생이 쓴 원문

Even though It\'s a just topic of homework, It sounds creepy. Because a wedding is a one of most important events in my life. If most of my friends couldn\'t come to my wedding, I will see what I did to my friends. I\'m trying to do my best to treat my friends. So, if that happend to me, the reason would be a covid-19.

강사 첨삭

Hey, Ian! I appreciate you doing your homework. I really hope all your friends could make it to that day.

- Debbie

Even though It\'s a just topic of homework, It sounds creepy.
>> Even though it\'s just a homework question, the situation would be awkward.

Because a wedding is a one of most important events in my life.
>> It\'s because someone\'s wedding is one of the most important events in his/her life.

If most of my friends couldn\'t come to my wedding, I will see what I did to my friends.
>> If most of my friends couldn\'t come to my wedding, I would reflect on what I did to my friends.

I\'m trying to do my best to treat my friends.So, if that happend to me, the reason would be a covid-19.
>> I\'m trying to do my best to treat my friends well, so, if that happened to me, the reason would be COVID-19.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기