What would you do if most of your friends couldn\'t make it to a special event?
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I graduated my university 10 years ago, but I still don\'t like to go alone some places gathering people. I am being a little bit of unpleasant when I am surrounded by strangers, especially for having fun.
However, unfortunately, there are more chances to go, because of special reasons like weddings or funerals that are not related with my enjoyment when I get on in years. It was very awkward if I would be thee alone, but there is a more important thing than my feeling. I could share host’s delight or sadness through attending them.
So, nowadays, I can go to a special events though I mind that I have to go alone.
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I graduated my university 10 years ago, but I still don\'t like to go alone some places gathering people.
>> graduated from my university 10 years ago, but I still don\'t like going to crowded places alone.
I am being a little bit of unpleasant when I am surrounded by strangers, especially for having fun.
>>Correct
However, unfortunately, there are more chances to go, because of special reasons like weddings or funerals that are not related with my enjoyment when I get on in years.
However, unfortunately, there are more chances to go, because of special reasons like weddings or funerals that are not related with my enjoyment when I get on in years.
>>Correct
It was very awkward if I would be thee alone, but there is a more important thing than my feeling.
>>It was very awkward if I would be there alone, but there is a more important thing than my feeling.
I could share host’s delight or sadness through attending them.
>>I could share the host’s delight or sadness through attending them.
So, nowadays, I can go to a special events though I mind that I have to go alone.
So, nowadays, I can go to a special events though I mind that I have to go alone.
>>So, nowadays, I can go to special events though I wish that I have to go alone.
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