What would you do if there is a massive earthquake?

2015-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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If my school happens a massive earthquake I would follow the rule. First,I will protect my head using desk. And I will open my class's door. And I will go out to the outside.When a massive earthquake happpen's at school we should follow the teacher and we don't have to line up when we go outside.Because we don't have time to line up.Actually,Korean doesn't happen the earthquake many times. But Japanese happen the earthquake very much.I think people can't defeat the nature in the future too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Good evening. Yes, you are right! ^^ We have to protect first our head and stay away from falling debris. In the future, there will be stronger earthquakes that will occur So, we have to be prepared. Always be ready. Anyway, thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas. I will see you in our class.   ~~ Teacher Kris   If my school happens a massive earthquake I would follow the rule. >> If my school was affected by a massive earthquake, I would follow the rule. First,I will protect my head using desk. >> First, I would protect my head using a desk.  And I will open my class\'s door. And I will go out to the outside. >> And, I would open my class\' door and go outside. When a massive earthquake happpen\'s at school we should follow the teacher and we don\'t have to line up when we go outside.Because we don\'t have time to line up. >> We should also follow the teach and we wouldn\'t have to line up when going outside because there\'s no time. Actually,Korean doesn\'t happen the earthquake many times. >> Actually, Korean do experience earthquakes  many times.  But Japanese happen the earthquake very much. >> But, Japan is experiencing a massive earthquake many times. I think people can\'t defeat the nature in the future too. >> Correct

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