What would you do if you could invisible for one day?
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I\'m sure it would be super amazing if I could invisible just for one day. I would play dodge ball with a bunch of boys all day if I could invisible. They all couldn\'t look for me and hit me so eventually I would be winner who is left by the end of each game. All of boys would be confused what was happening during the games and I would become a HERO of Dudgeball after all.
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!
T. DON
I\'m sure it would be super amazing if I could invisible just for one
day. I would play dodge ball with a bunch of boys all day if I could
invisible. They all couldn\'t look for me and hit me so eventually I
would be winner who is left by the end of each game. All of boys would
be confused what was happening during the games and I would become a
HERO of Dudgeball after all.
>> I\'m sure it would be super amazing if I could be invisible just for one
day. I would play dodge ball with a bunch of boys all day if I could
be invisible. They all couldn\'t look for me and hit me so eventually I
would be the winner who is left by the end of each game. All of the boys would
be confused on what was happening during the games and I would become a
HERO of dodge ball.
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