What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?
1. first of all,
I would like to reiceve the help nearby the police station.
2.second of all,
I would like to ask people to help me to find way road.
3.last,
I search a google map on internet . : )
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]! Happy Thursday!
Thank you very much for the effort.
I really appreciate it.
Please take note of the corrections.
I will talk to you later! Take care. ^^
T. Gracelyn
1. first of all, I would like to reiceve the help nearby the police station.
>>First of all, I would ask for help from a nearby police station.
2.second of all,I would like to ask people to help me to find way road.
2.second of all,I would like to ask people to help me to find way road.
>>Second, I would like to ask people to help me find the way.
3.last,I search a google map on internet . : )
3.last,I search a google map on internet . : )
>>Lastly, I will search for the map on the internet.
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