What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?
학생이 쓴 원문
It depends on where I am.
If I were in a desert island, I would be depressed and feel lonely. That\'s because I don\'t think I would be able to find any people there. But, I would figure out the way to get the most out of living in desert island or unfamiliar city by myself. If I was in city where strangers live, I would try to get along well with the strangers all anyhow. Though I would have to learn new language. I wish it wouldn\'t be happened to me.
강사 첨삭
1. It depends on where I am.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It depends on where that city is.
2. If I were in a desert island, I would be depressed and feel lonely.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If I were in a desert island, I would be extremely sad and lonely.
3. That\'s because I don\'t think I would be able to find any people there.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It\'s because I don\'t think there would be any people there.
4. But, I would figure out the way to get the most out of living in desert island or unfamiliar city by myself.
>>But, I would figure out the way to get the most out of living in a desert island or an unfamiliar city by myself.
5. If I was in city where strangers live, I would try to get along well with the strangers all anyhow.
>>If I was in a city where strangers live, I would try to get along well with the all of them anyhow.
6. Though I would have to learn new language.
>>Though I would have to learn a new language.
7. I wish it wouldn\'t be happened to me.
>>I wish it wouldn\'t be happening to me.
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