What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I have never thought this problem. Because I was born in this city, Gwangju and now I\'m living.
But If I go to another city, like Seoul, Busan and so on
I will search to overcome the situation that I met.
And I will ask proper solution of strangers.
강사 첨삭
1. Actually, I have never thought this problem.
>>Actually, I have never thought of this problem.
2. Because I was born in this city, Gwangju and now I\'m living.
>>Because I was born and raise in this city, Gwangju.
3. But If I go to another city, like Seoul, Busan and so on, I will search to overcome the situation that I met.
>>But If I will go to another city, like Seoul, Busan and so on, I will search to overcome the situation that I will meet.
4. And I will ask proper solution of strangers.
>>And, I will ask to strangers for help.
Good sentences.
- T. Melody ^^
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