What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?(ANSWER)

If there is a few extra hours in a day I want to play with my family. I want to play board games with my younger sister, and I want to play exiting activities with my parents. Also, I want to practice playing flute. I will practice playing flute at the few extra hours, and my flute skill will be upgraded! (I think my mom will says to me \"What are you doing! You have to study more!!\")

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

If there is a few extra hours in a day I want to play with my family.
I want to play board games with my younger sister, and I want to play exiting activities with my parents.
Also, I want to practice playing flute.
I will practice playing flute at the few extra hours, and my flute skill will be upgraded!
(I think my mom will says to me \"What are you doing! You have to study more!!\")  

  

CORRECTIONS:

If there is a few extra hours in a day, I want to play with my family.
I want to play board games with my younger sister, and I want to play exciting activities with my parents.
Also, I want to practice playing flute.
I will practice playing flute at the few extra hours, and my flute skill will be upgraded!
(I think my mom will say to me \"What are you doing! You have to study more!!\")

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. You just have a few mistakes, so well done! J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------