What would you do if you had an extra one to two hours in your day?

2023-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I will do new hobbies like dancing, cooking or tennis. Those are what I want to learn nowadays. But I can\'t do because of some reasons like money or times. I will do those hobbies singly someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

You\'ll learn that you\'re capable of change and progress by continually educating yourself and attempting new things, which will keep you open to new options in life.
Learning a new skill can help you break free from a rut.

I will see you in our next class. Practice English whenever you can!

__T. May[이름]n :)


I will do new hobbies like dancing, cooking or tennis.
>>> I will do new hobbies like dancing, cooking, or tennis.
Those are what I want to learn nowadays.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: That is what I am interested in learning right now.
But I can\'t do because of some reasons like money or times.
>>> But I can\'t do it for some reasons, like money or time.
I will do those hobbies singly someday.
>>> I will do those hobbies one at a time someday.

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