What would you do if you had more free time?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have more free time than now, I would more invest for myself.
I would study more and learn many things like foreign languages and another major.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
If I have more free time than now, I would more invest for myself.
>> If I had more free time than I do now, I would invest more in myself.
I would study more and learn many things like foreign languages and another major.
>> I would study more and learn various things, such as foreign languages and another major.
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