What would you do if you had more free time? Why?

2021-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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If I had more free time, I would have spent on reading the good books, articles, and best lectures as much as I could. Because this helps give me a greater understanding of the world around me and reading regularly helps to build my vocabulary and gives me greater communication skills.

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Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for this. 
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- T. Rina

1. If I had more free time, I would have spent on reading the good books, articles, and best lectures as much as I could. 
>> If I had more free time, I would spend it on reading good books, articles and best lectures as much as I could. 

2. Because this helps give me a greater understanding of the world around me and reading regularly helps to build my vocabulary and gives me greater communication skills.
>> Because this would help me give a greater understanding of the world around me and reading regularly would help me build my vocabulary and give me greater communication skills.

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