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In my opnion, there are three ways to communicate with them. First, of course, I should use translation app in my phone to communicate with them. This way is not perfect but it doesn\'t cost and it is convenient. I would try my best to convey my feeling and intention. Second, if there is a situation like that I Iose my phone and can\'t buy new one or borrow one, I would employ my guide who can speak both my language and language of this country. If I use this method, I could travel comfortably with my guide but it is expensive. Lastly, in case of that I can\'t use the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language. It unexpectedly works well. In Thailand, a long time ago, I did that and It worked well. Some people may think it is a shameful behavior. However, in fact, when you do body language to foreign people, they don\'t think so. I know the truth because I don\'t think so when I meet foreign people who do body language. I feel enthusiasm of them about communicating with me
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Hello Kevin!
Nice one in answering this query. But check your spelling before submitting your homework. Be familiar with the vocabulary you use. Keep on practicing! ^^
~T. Maine
>>In my opinion, there are three ways to communicate with them.
First, of course, I should use translation app in my phone to communicate with them.
>>First, of course, I should use a translation app on my phone to communicate with them.
This way is not perfect but it doesn\'t cost and it is convenient.
>>This way is not perfect but it doesn\'t cost a penny and it is convenient.
I would try my best to convey my feeling and intention.
>>Correct.
Second, if there is a situation like that I Iose my phone and can\'t buy new one or borrow one, I would employ my guide who can speak both my language and language of this country.
>>Second, in certain situations like when I lose my phone and can\'t buy a new one or borrow from someone, I will find and hire a tour guide who can speak my language and the country\'s language.
If I use this method, I could travel comfortably with my guide but it is expensive.
>>Correct.
Lastly, in case of that I can\'t use the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language.
>>Lastly, in case I can\'t use any of the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language.
It unexpectedly works well.
>>Correct.
In Thailand, a long time ago, I did that and It worked well.
>>A long time ago when I was in Thailand, I did that and it worked well for me.
Some people may think it is a shameful behavior.
>>Some people may think it is shameful.
However, in fact, when you do body language to foreign people, they don\'t think so.
>>In fact, when you use body language with foreigners, they don\'t think so.
I know the truth because I don\'t think so when I meet foreign people who do body language.
>>I know the truth because I don\'t care when I meet foreigners who communicate using body language.
I feel enthusiasm of them about communicating with me
>>I feel enthusiasm when I communicate with them.
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