what would you do if you have 3 days of weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have 3 days of weekend. At the first day I will do the laundry and clean my room. and I will go to the Busan in the evening. At the second day, I will meet my university friends or high school. At the third day, I will have a lunch with my family and go back to the my room.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Oscar!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
~ T. Lexie
If I have 3 days of weekend. At the first day I will do the laundry and clean my room.
>> If I had 3 days of weekend, I would do the laundry and clean my room on the first day.
and I will go to the Busan in the evening.
>> Then, I would go to Busan in the evening.
At the second day, I will meet my university friends or high school.
>> On the second day, I would meet my university and high school friends.
At the third day, I will have a lunch with my family and go back to the my room.
>> On the third day, I would have lunch with my family and go back to my room.
>> Then, I would go to Busan in the evening.
At the second day, I will meet my university friends or high school.
>> On the second day, I would meet my university and high school friends.
At the third day, I will have a lunch with my family and go back to the my room.
>> On the third day, I would have lunch with my family and go back to my room.
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